This week we had to write a desricptive piece of writing we had to look at a picture and describe like we were at that spot. Here is my finished piece of writing.
I am lying in a hammock on the beach drinking my tropical drink with a lemon on the side. As I look out at sea I see dolphins jumping around and having fun. I Stand into the soft flaming hot sand. I go for a swim. I still see the dolphins jumping around and I can see all of the fish that are swimming below me. I get out of the water and the sand feels so nice on my feet I lay back down and take a sip of my tropical drink.
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