W.A.L.T show not tell in our writing.
This was easy because
This was hard using the word angry
Her lips are shaking
Her eyes are furious
Her hands are rolling up into a fist.
Her guts are gurgling so fast
Her heart is beating so fast
She is so grumpy she wants to kick someone
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